As you can see from this little clipping from my feeble slide show, I tried to have lessons about with my talk. I just wanted to talk about my own experience and what happened to me. I felt that one of the first things I should have talked about was what went wrong. My biggest issues were coming from the whole reason I chose the cooking topic, my passion for baseball. I thought that the cooking would help me eat more nutritious foods to be a stronger person, but then as I worked out and talked to my trainers, they said that at this moment, I really shouldn't worry about nutrition I should just gain more mass. So more cooking? Yeah I guess so, I started cooking massive quantities of food after that. That was a fun time.
Now let's get to the presentation, my speech. I felt as though my beginning was strong, I hooked the audience by telling them about an email I sent to myself. This way I avoided the cliche approach saying, "For my project", or "This is what I learned". It was downhill from there. Then I led into what I thought went wrong, this is coincidentally also where my presentation started to go wrong. I had lost the story that I was telling and began to ramble. I rambled my way all the way through until the end, this was probably the worst part of my talk. I was most likely incoherent for my conclusion. I don't even think my point was given to my audience. Wow I really messed up. But oh well, it's over with now. Except I don't really think that I am done with this project, I'll build on the basic skills that I learned over the past few weeks. And with that, it seems that this blog will be coming to an end, so I will...
(End with a bang, you can never escape)
(also when I found the picture above, this came up and I'm not sure why)
Compared to your eggs your Ted Talk was pretty good. I'm happy that you could experience some Korean bbq, it is truly wonderful. Maybe you should ask Anthony Lee to make you some Korean bbq, because obviously he has become a 5 star Korean Chef in only 6 weeks. Good luck and good job!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you plan on continuing your cooking journey because it really is an amazing and useful skill to have under your belt. Also my boi you are overexaggerating your conclusion. There was a few good messages that you got across that I think the audience also understood. Also please cook for me because I want food.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your TED talk! I think that your powerpoint was definitely simpler than the others, but it helped to increase the focus on you, so I wouldn't consider it an entirely bad thing. For a lot of our projects, fancy slides wouldn't have helped - the fact that your visuals weren't too distracting might have actually helped your lesson (which I thought was very strong throughout your talk). Although you seemed to go through a rough period of time in the beginning of your project, you managed to patch it up pretty well. I wouldn't go too hard on yourself - personally, I felt your lesson was very easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteGood job, and good luck with your future cooking!
Your presentation wasn't really as bad as you make it out to be. I think that your idea about having simple slides was great in theory, it's about you... not the PowerPoint. The slides shouldn't be too simple though, or it looks like little effort was put into it. I'm glad that you really embraced the project towards the end. Now you've gotten a taste of what it was all about. Great work.
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